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So I was going to work on Monday morning. I work as a carpenter so I needed to go to the bus exchange.
But on the way to work I heard the siren wails. So I went to see where they were going. So I followed the
m and they led to a jewellery store. And there was a diamond ring missing. Then they looked for the dude and they found his house. He was there in the bathroom with the ring then he flushed it. And they broke in and took him to jail for 14 years.

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Captain Crabclaws Crew

Captain Crabclaws Crew

Reader Parts: Narrator, Captain Crabclaw, Elephant, Duck, Chicken

Narrator: Captain Crabclaw is looking for a crew to sail his ship and he is looking to meet suitable people.

Captain Crabclaw: But you’re a duck.

Duck: Ahhh… but I am fearsome. Quack, Quack, Quack, Quack, Quack.(flapping her wings and snapping her beak)

Captain Crabclaw: That would scare the scales off a sea dragon. Welcome aboard me hearty. 

Narrator: Captain Crabclaw tidied the rigging and waited. Before long they heard someone coming up the gangplank.

Elephant: I’ve come about the job as a first mate.

Captain Crabclaw: But you’re an elephant.

Elephant: But I’m fearsome.

Narrator: trrrooooot! He trumpeted so loudly he blew Captain Crabclaw’s hat off. Mouldering mainsails said Captain Crabclaw. That would frighten the fins off a flounder. Welcome aboard me hardy. 

Captain Crabclaw, Duck and Elephant swabbed the deck and waited.

Author: frances watts and david legge

Publisher:abc books

Adapted from:captain crabclaw’s crew 

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